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now it is clean.. but when it was dirty...

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Skills post 3

 Summer Camp is really important. Think about GLPS. When we go to good camp, our English skills will be better. So, we have to be careful when we choose our camp. Today, I'll compare and contrast Camp Big Apple, and Ranch West camp.

First, is about their educations and teachers. Big Apple's teachers are high-educated, they are Korean professors with at least a Masters degree, and some have their Doctorate. In one hand, it is really good point. But in the other hand, we don't know they studied and major English or not, and they are Koreans. But, Ranch West's teachers are recent graduates from the local University of Canada, so they will be better. Of course, they are almost same age as us, so they will know our problem, and can help to solve it.

Second, is about opportunities to use English with local people. In Camp Big Apple, they can use Korean in the dorm. Compared to the Big Apple, Ranch West is much better, because students will in home-stay situation, and it means we can talk with local people so often.

Third, I'll talk about their subject. We can choose our subjects in Ranch West. Contrasted with that we can't choose our subject in Big Apple. But in the Ranch West, we can choose in Math, Art, Politics... and many other subjects. So, we will be more interested in studying if we are going to the Ranch West.

Last, is about activities. In Camp Big Apple, activities will include tours of the city, trips to local museums, and tickets to Broadway shows. In one hand, it will be good for learn. But in the other hand, we need time torest and play, too. So, we need physical activities to be healthy. Also, city can be dangerous. So, Ranch West is better than Big Apple. 

To summarize, RW is more safe, better for our health, more fun and interesting, easy to use English, solve the problem, and teachers can be better.

So, I think Ranch West Camp is better than Camp Big Apple. Thank you for reading my essay.

skills post 2 : sum., par.

1. handout(two animal attacks)
-summarizing
  - Shark Attacks
Many people worry about attacked by a shark. It is possible, it is highly unlikely. Struck by lightning is easier than attacked by a shark. And it is real, that drown is easiter than to be attacked by a shark. However, if you are still worried, traveling in groups. Also, don't stay in the water if you have a cut. Sharks are good at smell something.
-paraphrasing
  - 4th paragraph of Bear Attacks
Case of Yellowstone National Park in U.S, drown is much easier than attacked by a bear. From 1839 to 1994, 101 people drown, but only 5 died cause of bad bears.
2. articles, movies, stories, or personal experiences
-summarizing
 - movie 'HaeUnDae'
  -In 2004, there was a big tsunami in Indonesia, Mansik lost Yunhee's dad. So, he loves Yunhee, but he couldn't propose her. One day, he decided to propose her. At that time, Doctor Hyui, Kim knew that Korean sea's state is almost same as Indonesia's(tsunami). He thought that really big tsunami will come, but nobody believed him. Tsunami came, and Mansik and Yunhee knew their love. At last, Hyui Kim and his wife died, but Mansik and Yunhee lived, cause of his father(?). (Also there is story about other things, top...)

-paraphrasing
http://www.koreatimes.co.kr/www/news/art/2011/08/20/-92465.html

original: However, the new album is ready to break previous records. Their fifth studio album sold more than 60,000 copies in the five days since its release on Aug. 3, a relatively high amount for the local music scene. Some fans bought 10 copies of the new album as there are 10 different album covers featuring photos of each member. The album will be released in 11 countries.
mine:Super Junior's new album is ready for make new records. 5 days from album's releasing, their 5th album sold more than 60000 copies. It is pretty high amount. Some fans bought 10 copies, because of 10 different member's cover. It will release in 11 countries.

FUN POST : Super Junior's new song = Mr. Simple

Do youu know about Super Junior?
They are singers... . who are in SM Entertainment.
Their new song's name is Mr. Simple.
It is really good.
Try to listen it..
Search lyrics in naver. I can't write. so.....
This is Super Junior's 5th album.
When I go back to Seoul, I'll buy their album...
(I want to buy right now. Actually...^^ Or maybe my mom will help me..)


We have only 10 members in Super Junior now..
Actually, Super Junior has 13 members.
KHC
SDH
CSW
LHJ
JKH
PJS
KJU
KRU
LDH
LSM

These are their initials..

I'll talk about Super Junior little bit more.
They were idol group. But now, they are too old!
One of them will marry! He has a girlfriend, and recently he said he'' marry with her.
They debuted(?) at 2005. Their first album title was SuperJunior 05.
This album is really important, because I'm not sure, but it can be thier almost last album.. I think..
It is really sad.. But they are too old...!
SuperJunior's leader. Jung Su, Park borned(?) at 1983! It means he is 29 years old in Korea!
He'll be 30 years old!! Oh my god... I can't believe it..

★SUPER JUNIOR MR.SIMPLE!★

(I'll write English name of songs, when we have English names)

1. mr.simple

2. opera

3. be my girl

4. walkin'

5. storm

6. good friends

7. feels good

8. memories

9. sun flower

10. white christmas

11. Y

12. my love, my kiss, my heart

13. perfection

These are 13 songs in Super Junior's new album.

SHINee from SM Ent. (same as Super Junior's) cheer Super Junior's new album, with unique T-shirts.

Their name is

Onew(Jingi Lee), TaeMin(Lee), JongHyun(Kim), Minho(Choi), Key(KiBum Kim)

There are many good singers in SM Ent.

For example, there are SJ, SHINee, Girl's Generation, f(x), TVXQ.. And other many like Boa..

I LIKE THEM.

♥SUPER JUNIOR MR. SIMPLE♥

 This is their Music Video.
★★
  

what the world eats

(from http://img.timeinc.net/time/photoessays/2007/hungry_planet/11.jpg, 'hungry planet')

 

Here is a girl called Simone. She loves eating. Her favorite food was beef stew, and berry yogurt sundae. Her family used $159.18 to buy food. One day she saw a picture. That picture was...

They just used $1.23 for a week. She surprised and wanted to help them. She was always full, and there were so many food garbage, so she was sad and wanted little change. She told their parents, and they said she's really kind, and it's really good idea. Her mother's dream was do voulnteer work, but she didn't have time, and she regret it. So, they saved money. They just eat like

They used $189.09 for a week. They saved $100 a week, and they got $5000. They used $2000 for help chad, $1000 for

Ecuador. They use $31.55 for a week. Then, many people came to Simone's home to interview them. It was weekday, so Simone and her father weren't there. Journalists wanted to interview Simone's mom, but she said it was Simone's idea. Journalists went to her school. They knocked and found Simone. She didn't know why they wanted to find her, so she just ran outside. At that time, someone wanted to steal their money. His name was Simon. Simon was Simone's friend, but he's really mean. Journalists ran, too. They met Simon, and went to Simone's house together. Simone knew why, and came out. Journalists asked her many question. Next day, she's main news of  TV and newspaper. She became super star, and other students didn't like her. Simon tried to steal money, but journalists blocked him. She saved more money, and invested. She is billionare. Still, she's helping other country. Simone is not really exist, but she's really cool. I want to do like Simone...!

 

Chain Writing

There was a girl who really loves idol stars. She started copying everything about him or her, if she like him/her. One day, she decided to have a plastice surgery. However, when she looked at the mirror after the surgery, her face got uglier. So she, did surgery over and over, until she got a pretty face. Soon, she got a night face, pretty and long face. People started noticing her face and though it was sos pretty theat they should have it. Few days later she felt pain. With all that plastic surgery, her skin began to break apart. So, she ran to a hospital. When she went to the hospital the doctors and nurses fricked out because her face disappeared! Then she started to lose her long hairs, too. Now she looked like an egg attached to human body. Did you know - later on, her eggy face crcked and then she had 2 heads. Those crakced too and became 4 heads. She became a monster with 4 heads. Now, we know that plastic surgery is terrible...